The Madness

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Basic plot: set after the anime...the black blood left behind in medusa room (from the battke) there takes the life of its own and also takes physical form calling itself by the Madness. It goes on a killing spree. Maka and the other need to stop it, as well as crona confessing his feelings for maka. I'll start it tomorrow as my laptop time is nearly up

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heres the start CHAPTER ONE: THE BEGINNING: A HAUNTED HOUSE?

The home of Medusa Grogon was left abandoned after the death of it's owner and unattended to. However, Lord Death knew that as soon as the Kishin Asura was destroyed, the house must be searched from top to button for any books/magical items that would be dangerous in the wrong hands. And who else would he send but the Academy's new janitors: a Immortal and a Frog Witch. Quite fitting, considering they used to work for the deceased. But were these two happy with their assignment? Well...kinda.

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Check out where you described Madness. This is a pretty big no-no on the site, kid.

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Jt wrote:: Check out where you described Madness. This is a pretty big no-no on the site, kid.

On members announcement or here?

Or if it's the overpowering rule, I said that the counter curse makes him a true mortal

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Well, is this a fanfic or an actual Rp? If it is an Rp, then I don't care how powerful he is, it's your story. If it is a fanfic, both need to be moved to writing and art then.

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Sorry ...it's a rp

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Then he may be too powerful. For now, I'm only going to respond here.

Let's start with species. I'm going to say he is a clown, as he is a being a madness without a soul. This means, though, that he can't wield a demon weapon/death scythe or the evil version of them.

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Well, he takes the form of crona with subtle differences (his eyes yellow, face in a permaent grin and a beard) as he's black blood, he can take off a his arm and use it, another redialing. However, he can still feel pain and is not so powerful. In fact, he learns the skills of the people he kills. He laughs in the face if danger, but only when the counter curse is said does he fear death

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1. Learning skills of people he kills is Op, especially with the characters on this site.

2. Characters cannot be connected to actual characters that appear in the anime/manga.

3. You say he is pure black blood, I need to know. Does he have a soul or not?

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