I'm sorry but this is far from done sadly. Firstly... This is fairly obvious, no offense meant, but use the right template.
Secondly, the history, appearance, personality, asside from being the wrong template, is far too short. Improve all three. Give me at least 5x more on the appearance and personality, and at least 3x more on the history.
I have great doubts as to the robotic arm, and you failed to give any real information on it. Please edit the application to include these things.