Nico the power house. The Amnesia Swordsman?

Name: Nico, unknown.

Age: 17

Gender: male

Weapon: N/a

Appearance: He has shoulder length white hair, and a average body. He wears a black kimono robe a white over robe. He also has black pants white socks, and sandals. His eyes are usualy closed. He is 5'7, and has a thin build, often making people think he is weak. This is misleading since he is quite strong. His soul is dark green and has a chibi version of his face on it.

Personality: He is the man who believes in personal freedom. He encourages everyone to act themselves and doesn't judge them on it at all, saying everyone has their own opinion and right to do as they please. Thus he is the friend of the outcasts, the delinquents, the nerds, and everyone who is outcast for being themselves. He has a huge ring of friends, who he sees ad his gang and friends. He also is the guy who guards his friends, looking out for others rather than himself.

Likes: army food rasions, training.

Dislikes: his friends getting hurt.

History: Nico grew up in the slums. Constantly jumped and living the rough life, he grew up in mostly worst case scenarios. While he doesn't care, he prefers to look out for his friends like he did there. Sadly, the entire area he lived in was destroyed by a clown, while he was kidnapped. Saved by a traveling swordsman, he taught him to use as sword and the art of Kami no Ken Ryu, a slow, hard hitting sword style. While the swings are fast, it has little mobility and speed movement wise. He traveled with him for a while, thinking of him as a dad, but later moving into Death City. Once he was jumped and has amnesia, only retaining his abilities, 1st name, and habits (such as trying to use his last name). He is now a student of the DWMA.

Other: Madness of Power: Black*Star's madness.

Kami no Ken Ryu- Meaning God Sword Style, this focuses on signal powerful strikes. it has little mobility and speed movement wise.
Lack of 6th sense- sorta like Black*Star, he has no sixth sense, but this increases his other senses phenomenally.

Artsman- being a swords man, Nico practices the arts regularly, rock gardening, landscape painting, fancy smanchy hand writing, and of course sparing.

Soul Force- can shoot soul wavelength. His is much Black*Star's prefering one or two strong strikes rather than rapidly shooting it. can be used 2 times per thread before his body cann't handle it, is twice as powerful as normal soul menace.

Have you read the rules?
"ALRIGHT! LET'S GO, SOUL RESONANCE!"

I'd like to see two things:

1) The sections separated. It's hard to read like this.

2) More appearance. What else can you say? How tall is he? He has a thin build, doesn't he?

Fix this and I'll look again.

This looks better now. approved