firefly
Posts : 185 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2014-04-19 Age : 28
| Subject: firefly (demented by choice ^_^) Fri Jul 04, 2014 11:26 am | |
| http://anime.desktopnexus.com/get/1568624/?t=hhpo594t8ne4964g6602nf45v453b6b39f53017Name: firefly Age: 23 Gender: girl Weapon: Appearance: She stands at 5ft9in tall for a woman in her family who averidged 5ft2in. She has a strong yet agile build and is whicked fast. She has long white hair that goes way past her butt and is a pain to brush. She has slightly tanned skin with blood red cat like eyes that when she was a human where a bright shade of green. She will often wear a black cloak over herself and under that she wears a white blouse with a poped up collar and red straps around the arms and a red skirt with thin session suspenders. Her human outfit is a dark green light green and white plad shirt with faded ripped jeans and her hair in a long braid looking very much like a country girl. Personality: she is sweet in a demented sort of way. Often playing with her "food" before she eats it. She also has a complete soft spot for her brother who was her role model growing up even when she was sent away by that same brother so he wouldn't be tempted to kill her. She is very sadistic often loving to test out experimental theorys before killing her victims or they die in the process. She has an extremely strong hate for adults because of her aunts family. She come times acts very childish and through tantrums. But when she is serious or angry or hungry she gets a glow to her eyes and her madness jumps in pressure making her very intimidating. Likes: she loves old time torture methods, hearing people scream,the taste of blood,and her brother Dislikes: when her prey gets away,when they die to quickly, when they make no noise, all adults, small cramped spaces History: she lived in a small farm town with her mother and father and her older brother. As a kid she looked up to her brother and he was her roll model. When she was about 8years old her brother snapped and killed a group of bully's that had been tormenting him and when he came home he was covered in blood when his parents asked him what happened her killed them. She didn't care since she was born her parents had hated her she was an unplaned pregnancy and was an extra mouth they didn't want her brother was the only one to care for her. When he killed their parents he spared her and sent her to live with her aunt. When there at her aunts farm she started tormenting small animals then slowly moved to larger. Her aunts family started to hate her and found her disgusting the would beat her and lock her in closets to keep her from other people and animals. Not even letting her out to use the restroom which only mad her more angry and insane. One day when she was let out of her small closet for a treat for her 16th birthdag she found a small dirt covered knife one that she had used on the animals dirt covered blood was dried on the blade and she used it to kill each of her relatives and ate there souls like her brother had. After that she started abducting people and doing cruel experiments on them and over time she gained more and more souls.she herd rumors of her brother in death city and jumped at the chance to find him and be together again this time as cruel sadistic beasts. Powers:Abilities | Description | # of souls needed | soul suck | she can suck the souls out of people by biting them with vampire like teeth. But sucking out there souls is hard it takes complete concentration which leaves her open for attacks.she and her victims have to stay completely still so she topics has to knock them out first. it also takes a long time to complete it she has to suck for about 10min (4posts) and if her victims break free then she has to start all over | 10 | dance of flames | by moving her hands in what looks to be unusual hand shapes she can create sparks in the air that she can ignite into a small blaze and fling it at her opponents up too 100ft away accuracy decreased the farther away the opponents are and she can adjust the size of the fire | 30 | flame whip | by snapping her fingers and pointing her first two fingers she can summon a whip of pure fire to use in any way she wants it's a ten foot whip so it's not suited for small spaces | 40 | shadow murge | she can combine with the shadows erasing her scent, madness aura,and her shape. Shes still there but is covered by shadows she can still be hit and it only lasts for 30min or until she is discovered | 50 | claws of fire | she can slice with her nails through the dance of flames and create blades of fire that fly at an opponents it is a very wide move but will conform to spaces and if hit causes very bad lacerations that bleed and burn | 60 | smoldering hellhounds | can summon up to three hellhounds to assist her. They only last for 30min. Each hellhound looks like a pure black wolf with red eyes it looks like it's fur is smoldering with embers | 70 | familure | can sommon one hellhound to be a companion indefinitely | 80 |
more to add later once I reach 80souls Other: crow is her brother Have you read the rules?(Let's go soul resonance )
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| Subject: Re: firefly (demented by choice ^_^) Sun Jul 06, 2014 4:04 pm | |
| Alright-y then!~
The only problem is in the abilities. She gains two abilities at 30 souls, and there is only 5 souls in between the last two on the table. There needs to be at least 10 soul in between each ability. ALSO, you need to define what the "hellhounds" are like. Because summoning 3 50ft tall creature's to fight for you, and 3 stark white canines are two very different things. x3
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firefly
Posts : 185 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2014-04-19 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: firefly (demented by choice ^_^) Sun Jul 06, 2014 4:07 pm | |
| Oh in the form it says she gains two ability at 20souls ...I'll fix it | |
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| Subject: Re: firefly (demented by choice ^_^) Sun Jul 06, 2014 4:46 pm | |
| Much better! May the fur fly!!!
Approved~ |
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| Subject: Re: firefly (demented by choice ^_^) Sun Jul 06, 2014 5:24 pm | |
| Er-, sorry. This app was un-approved. Her first ability is extremely OP. It's basically a one hit kill from what you've put. And it could just be a nip. Sorry about that, I wasn't paying attention. |
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| Subject: Re: firefly (demented by choice ^_^) Tue Jul 08, 2014 10:16 am | |
| Alright, alright. Looks good now. ^^'
Accepted!! |
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