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Nereza poured her will into disregarding her aching anatomy. The meister she had sparred with was hardly forgiving, but Nere's own drive was even less so. She had met more than her limit with Miss Roman.

Despite tendencies to the contrary, she sat in the middle of the stairs leading to the academy. It did nothing to hide her presence as she would have normally enjoyed, and it had no shade to defend her milk white skin from the harsh desert sun beating down on it. Even still, at the moment, it felt right somehow.

She had been sitting there since morning however, the school crowds simply flowing past her. It was midday now. Class had started, and her formerly perfect attendance was ruined. Something was eating her. She couldn't make it as on autonomous weapon, could she?

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Satoshi sighed. Today was just another grim, lifeless day for him, and yet he had to approach with a smile. He knew if he continued to drown his thoughts in a pool of pessimism, then nothing good would come out of it. It would just be asking for a more depressing lifestyle than he already has, and besides, Kirino would hate to see him suffer in such a way. "I'm doing this for you, Kirino..." He muttered, forcing a small, almost unnoticeable smile. Trudging along silently, the male continued to move his body forward, taking a deeper and deeper breath with each step. It almost felt like he had walked miles just to reach his school,or that he had past the same diners several times. Was he even heading the wrong way, or had his depression fogged up his brain to the extent where he couldn't even properly navigate through out the city?

"Thank fucking god!" Satoshi cried, finally spotting the academy far ahead. It was almost like a wave of relief had toppled over him the moment his eyes had landed onto it-- and yet, despite all of that, he was late. Classes had begun, and no matter what lie he could muster up for the teacher, there would be a lecture waiting for him if he were to enter the class room. So, instead of going through such a horrifying experience, he set his mind on returning home. That is, before he had saw the girl sitting upon the academy's steps. The girl was stunning to say the least, and if Satoshi didn't despise love the way he does, he would have probably attempt to ask her out. "What are you doing here? Class already started." He informed her, displaying almost no emotion when speaking. "Or are you late too?"

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Nereza loosed a disconcerted inner sigh. Something that didn't dare show itself on her face. Ever still, as the porcelain doll. That boy had just yelled something not long ago, but it hadn't registered until now. That kind of language was lazy, and careless. She could already tell the boy would be a hassle, or easily dismissed. "I appear to be late for class." She would respond in her classic monotone, and evading any in-deph answers revealing her reasons for acting in such a way.

Her expression effectively set in stone, she rose to her full height, easily a foot shorter than his, and dusted off her skirt. Staring into his torso, she stares through him, and never at, never finding his eyes with her own dull set. "If you are new, or lost I may show you to your class." She continued in the same dull voice, hoping greatly to wish him a good day soon.

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Something about this girl was off. Was it the way she looked? The way she spoke? Maybe it was all of the above. Regardless, Satoshi didn't even bothered to care about it. Whether she was like this because of some horrible accident or not was none of his concerns, and he wanted to keep it that way."No, I'm not new." His voice was dull, much like hers, but had a hint of annoyance in it that separated the two from each other. Usually it wouldn't be like this; Satoshi would always tuck any bit of annoyance within him, so actually showing a bit of it was rare. "Your assistance is not required, I was planning on visiting the cafe anyways."

As much as he wanted to just leave then and there, he couldn't. That girl had a lifeless aura, and as much as he longed to rest at home, his curiosity had him questioning this girl like there's no tomorrow. Satoshi always found psychology something that's interesting, so seeing another human being with almost no emotion made him question whether she would have the same reaction as normal human beings. Does she fear the unknown? Does she have any sense of emotions? Was there a drug numbing her to a certain extent, or was this simply the result of a bad day. "Do you want to join me?"

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The jolt, and flutter of the question shocked Nereza's system, though it had yet to voice itself superficially. Still doll. Hadn't he just sounded slightly irked? Spat assistance back in her face? Being bipolar would explain this, as well as cursing on the stairs before sounding completely dull like herself. Perhaps he was violent, and wanted to lure her away from safety. He did seem a bit ragged for an academy student... And perhaps a sight too tall.

Nereza finally blinked, like an organic computer that had just finished loading its response. "I must apologize." She began the incomplete thought, clawing to find an actual reason of any sort to refuse. "I do not drink coffee." There didn't exist a reason on this planet with less fortitude than the one she had just given. At any rate, surely he would take a hint before she ran out of rubbish. The alternative was awkward one on one time with tall, dark, and likely scarred upper-classman.

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